Active believers need to live in faith In order not to lose the essence of faith, both churches and believers need to face the difficulties of reality and make efforts to check their own view of faith. It is not just about pointing out the problems of the church, but also about reclaiming the true meaning of faith when each believer reflects on their faith and participates in the change. In this way, I tried to express it more with a greater focus on individual responsibility and the need for change. Emphasizing the Essence of Faith The essence of faith lies in finding meaning and hope in life even in the midst of difficulties. The church and believers do not stay in external forms or customs, but the true value of faith. In other words, we need to reflect on our inner peace, love, and the process of growing in our community. When facing real problems Keeping the essence of faith is the unshakable strength of faith and life. I focused on the essence of faith and emphasized the key message. More specifically, what direction or what to add

 Active believers need to live in faith.

To preserve the essence of faith, both churches and believers need to face the realities of the world and make efforts to examine their own views of faith. It is not just about pointing out the problems of the church, but also about reclaiming the true meaning of faith by having each believer reflect on their faith and participate in the change.

In this way, I tried to express it more with a greater focus on individual responsibility and the need for change. 

Emphasizing the Essence of Faith The essence of faith lies in finding meaning and hope in life, even amid difficulties.

The church and believers do not stay in external forms or customs, but in the actual value of faith. In other words, we need to reflect on our inner peace, love, and the process of growing in our community.

When facing real problems Keeping the essence of faith is the unshakable strength of faith and life. I focused on the essence of faith and emphasized the key message. More specifically, what direction or what to add